on a cold night in the world on drakor there was a boy named thomas and his uncle named Kogan
thomas had lived with his uncle as long as he could remember but when he ever asked how his parent's died all he ever said was
"they died on the mountain of kindeo,thats all you need to my boy. uncle kogan said"
it was the beginning of the annual hunt of the 5 shards of the heart of scholo.
thomas was finally at the age where he could join and finally find out what had killed his parents.
"you ready to go thomas. said kejo"
kejo was a long time friend of thomas since they were little playing sword fights in the fields.
"ya just let me go the oldker shop downtown to get some supplies.said Thomas"
" ok meet me at the fields before the ceremony starts ok and dont be late. said kejo
"I'll won't I promise.said Thomas" before running off into town.
When Thomas got to town he looked for the ol chek and when he found it he opened the door and walk in.
The ol chek was the oldest and best place to go to for weapons and armor since it is owned by the best blacksmith in town that goes by the name of cheake.
It's a bit short, but not too shirt, although there are some grammar issues that you need to straighten out here too.
(I'm going to go ahead and feature it ahead of time, though.)