Everything is going great,
I feel your pulse and your high heart rate...
I thought tonight would be the night,
But I guess my gut feeling is never right...
Just when I thought we were gonna go further and deeper into love,
You vanished and flew away like a dove...
The fault wasn't yours,
I know that's true...
But I really looked forward to spending the whole night with you...
So just when everything was going swell,
You vanished and left me lonely as hell...
But i'm sure that with a little more effort and might,
We'll have the fun that we were gonna have tonight!
...akwardest silence caused by a random person walking in and posting an extremely long but ironically not too silent well, possibly silent since it is only text after all, but of course, we're counting text as sound since we're web-surfing, so yeah, this isn't silent post...
no... it is about love... only those with a dirty mind would think this is about sex... i fixed the spelling errors and grammer so now there should be no cause for complaint!
Yeah....I'm used to writing with a PEN where I don't have to put a space...If I'm typing on a computer I'll put a space though but only because on a computer I'm extremely fast...
well apart from one spelling error, that is how a poem is structured! and i've had lessons in poetry! oh... and mia, darling, u need to leave a space after commas, exclamation marks, question marks etc... sorry but i also have hi standards... lol
By @pkmn master
@PhoebeReidSmith
@Tora.Silver
