Blood. By Black1Death

Blood.

By Black1Death
Posted 04 May 2012 00:55
Category: Poetry

It drips out of my soul... I live no more!

Life has been nothing but a chore! The blood hits the floor. I cry as I see it drops.

You tell me to die! I say shut up! And you ask why....

Thank you for reading! This is the sort of thing I want to continue! Tell me if its good or bad!

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Comments

CatsRule
29 May 2012 15:14

this is awsome u should go on and i see that u have =)

Black1Death
11 May 2012 02:58

Quoth DeAtHtHeKiD1464:

Badass Bro

Thanks!

Black1Death
08 May 2012 11:18

Quoth joeyd718:

preety good, but it makes ya sound kinda emo 0-0

When I was reading this comment I said outloud : "No its... Oh...." lol!

Joeyd718
08 May 2012 04:08

preety good, but it makes ya sound kinda emo 0-0

Black1Death
04 May 2012 03:16

Quoth catsrule:

yw you should write more!!

I will!

CatsRule
04 May 2012 03:12

yw you should write more!!

Black1Death
04 May 2012 01:06

Quoth catsrule:

gr8 job!!

Thank you! I love getting feedback from people! It helps me allot!

CatsRule
04 May 2012 01:03

gr8 job!!

Black1Death
04 May 2012 01:02

Quoth Loveheart:

its sooo awesome! great job babe

Thanks!

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