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New Moon: Chapter 12
Avatar By acidAPPLE
Posted 09 Feb 2018 03:29
Category: Short Story
Blitz stared after me as I ran. I could feel her gaze burning into my fur - a cold, chilling burn.
Thorns scratched at my pelt and whipped at my face, but I didn't stop. I really wasn't concerned for whatever was there, really, I just loved the thrill of chasing after something.

I stopped, out of breath, and looked around. Before me loomed a large hill on a field. The forest had gone.

A flash of white fur caught my attention. I turned.

A pulse of pain shook my body and my legs buckled over, and I let out a huff as my breath was knocked out of my chest.
Another flash - gray. These were wolves.

My attention turned to a cry of alarm. I didn't need to turn my head, however, to know it came from Blitz.

I tried to stand, but was shoved down by another heavy paw.
"Have any intention coming here?" Snarled a voice by my ear.
I tried to speak, but the words didn't come.

"Stop it!" Blitz snarled, before yelping.
I flinched as I guessed she was knocked down as well.

"Seriously, though, Breeze, the wolf's right!" Came a second, more cheerful sounding voice.
I blinked. Breeze?
"Go away," muttered the white wolf. I guessed that was Breeze. It made sense, though he didn't seem as gentle as his name suggested.
The wolf spoke again, "Let the poor wolves go."
"Make us, boss!" The gray wolf sneered.

I looked up. Through the matted white and gray fur, I saw a white face. The wolf's body had flashes of silver on her chest as well as the thick mane of fur around her neck.
She stared straight at me.
I held her gaze, trying to appear challenging in any way. The she-wolf gave a snort and trotted up to me.
"Let him go, you filthy flea-bags!" She snarled as she knocked them off me.
I blinked.
She turned to where Blitz stood. Thankfully, she was indeed standing and didn't have two wolves piled on top of her.
"Good." She growled, sounding satisfied.
She turned back to me and crouched to meet my height, as I was still laying on the ground.
"So, what's your name there, buddy pal?"
I hesitated a bit. "What's yours?"
"Oh, don't play that. Tell me yours first!"
She sounded demanding, so I did. "Ebony."
She stood straight up. "Well, what a strange name. My name's Eye Blaze."
I stared at her.
She gave a snort of laughter, "What, haven't heard of a name with two words, is that it?"
"Well, uh..Yeah. Why is that your name?"

"Well, it all started, long, long, ago..." She sounded as if to begin, then she let out a snort again. "As if I'd tell you, What did you think you were doing, chasing what you can? Don't you know that there are actual wolves out here? You're lucky Breeze and Storm Cloud and Lightning Flash, and not to mention, me, are friendly enough to let you go!"

I stared at her, then sat up. "If you hadn't noticed, you were spying on us!"

Eye Blaze stopped for a moment "Oh, yes! I was spying on two wolves doing nothing but arguing about something useless!" She rolled her eyes with a sniff.

I let out a snarl "It was none of your business, you flea-pelt!"

She stopped, looked at Blitz, and nodded. "Let's go then. All of you."

"What?" Blitz and I said, almost in unison.
"You heard me," and she trotted off.

"Hey!" Came a shout from a dark gray wolf. Must be Lightning Flash, I figured. "I'm leading here."
"Oh, yes, of course, Alpha!" She sneered.
I blinked. What kind of wolf disrespects their leader?

I looked back at Blitz, and shrugged. "I guess we've got no other choice."
That's right," Came a snarl, and I felt a powerful shove from Breeze. "Okay, okay." I muttered, lashing my tail.
"We're coming with you.
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Avatar MIMtheHERO
29 May 2018 22:26
Nice writing style!
Avatar acidAPPLE
29 May 2018 22:33
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Avatar oswaldo123
09 Feb 2018 05:32
this is some quality stuff
Avatar GEMini GUARDian
09 Feb 2018 05:09

This is getting good! :0

//writes down names and descriptions of new characters in my notes//

Now I'll never forget them >:3
Avatar FiNrOd
09 Feb 2018 15:52
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-loses notes-
Avatar GEMini GUARDian
09 Feb 2018 16:06
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I actually did. :-:
Avatar FiNrOd
09 Feb 2018 17:40
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