(Warning: The events, people and locations in this story are purely fictional and are not intended on represent any real events or some real country, any similarity with real historical events are purely coincidental)
-A group of Leolandian generals leaded a coup in 1957, and the country just started a new era, with repression, sanctions, being allied of the U.S. to prevent communism... Bla bla bla... I already told to you that part in my last article, and i also told you about the Gutiérrez Brothers and their cousin Erika Roberta... But, in this moment, i need to talk you specially about this woman, because, she was very important in the history of this country... So who was this very remembered lady?
-Well, Erika Roberta Gutiérrez was born in February 19th of 1924, being younger than her cousins, their birthdates were as follows:
Paúl Gutiérrez: March 24th, 1893
Raúl Gutiérrez: January 1st, 1914
Saúl Gutiérrez: May 1st 7th, 1917
When Erika was born, Leoland was still a Spanish Overseas Territory, her dad was such an infamous man called Vladimir Gutiérrez, brother of the father of the three Gutiérrez brothers, Vladimir used to be a corrupt bureaucrat of the collonial administration, he worked on the local government, he was very suspicious for the Spanish Authorities, who accused him of money laundering and embezzlement, but Vladimir looked like too good for hiding any evidence against him, so the authorities couldn't judge him.
Vladimir, also was a an alcoholic man, he normally went drunk to the local courts, so almost everybody, including the General Captain, hated him, but they couldn't dismiss him without the permission of the Central Spanish Goverment, and they haven't any valid reason to dismiss him, according to the law codes of the Spanish Leoland...
Also, he had several anger problems, even the best psycologists of the country couldn't help him, so... He was a drunk man and also with anger problems... So yes, sadly, his daughter Erika and his wife Mariana suffered the consequences of Vladimir's several problems
During her childhood, Erika was victim from her father's abuses, she suffered domestic abuse from her dad, he he hit and abused her every time when he came back drunk to his house, and also his wife. Erika had really a tragic and traumatic childhood. But, her mother Mariana was totally the opposite, he was a lovely, adorable, pacific and emphatic woman, she always believed and supported her daughter, Erika also really loved her mother
This suffering lasted until Erika was 9 years old, because, in May 15th of 1933, Vladimir was murdered by an extremist independentist terrorist who attacked the court, We need to remember, that was the years of the Second Spanish Republic, a very dark period for Spain, with a deep ideological division, who also felt in a far away colony like Leoland, there was times of fear and uncertainly for all the spanish citizens. Mariana was worried about the problems in the whole Spain, so she ask for help to her good friend and brother in law, Daniel Gutiérrez, he was and old man and father of three sons, Paúl, who was already 40 years old, and was an alcoholic man, just like Vladimir, but single, and instead of violent, he was just dumb and childish, but also a corrupt military general, he was a soldier of the Spanish army for many years, and even being stupid, the only thing he was good for was corruption, and through a lot of bribery, he became general of the Spanish army His brother Raúl was a simple 19 years old, who just wanted to find out a job, but he couldn't find any option, so he also joined Spanish Army, and the younger brother Saúl was a simple 16 years old, he was still going to the High School. Daniel allowed Mariana and Erika to live in his big house, he was a rich landowner with his estates, So Erika lived in a big beautiful house, with her mother and her cousins...
Its because i also like history, so i wanted to put that style, i did it because, it helps that the Leolandian story really feels more authentical and inmmersive, obviously, with its comedical moments, but in this episode, there's no comedy, only origin story and tragedy
Kashbanooka
22 Jun 2024 06:16
In reply to MarioGamer98629
Ah cabrón, no me jodas, it took me so long to do this just for you to tell him "it's not my style." And why don't you also try to appreciate other types of writing styles? Don't take this the wrong way, I'm just saying this as constructive criticism ;D
Kashbanooka
22 Jun 2024 06:34
In reply to MarioGamer98629
I know i know, the comedical and more wacky part has been forgotten here, the funny narration was replaced with a serious narration, and looks just like an serious historical text, but this is supposed to be an tragical origin story for a villain, i couldn't fit any comedy or more interesting narration resources, if you miss comedy and a interesting narrator, it would be back in Episode 4!
Kashbanooka
22 Jun 2024 06:40
In reply to MarioGamer98629
Just a couple of fixes before I feature this (content-wise, very good!)
Erika tuvo 9 años, y Paúl ya tuvo 40 años.
Erika had 9 years, and Paul already had 40 years. Erika was 9 years old, and Paul was already 40 years old. (You did this correctly in other places, so I'm wondering if you're machine translating this from Spanish or something. If you ever need to phrase something better, the Featured Blog Factory folk can help you along with that :D)
...las fechas de nacimiento de ustedes era (?) las siguientes: (?)
...their born dates were the next ones: ...their birthdates were as follows: