"The chase" is the book that i currently write. I already wrote 7 pages (4,160 words). Right now i need to make some changes (i dont like he start ) but i hope you enjoy it.

Part 1

Once upon a time there was a boy who was called Philip . Philip was a nice young boy but he was very shy. There was the time when he thought : why should I be different than the other kids ,why cant I be free ,why am I every time wrong, why cant I forget my past. No one could answer his questions but he knew the answers…….he knew them, he was ‘different’ because of all that, which happened, he couldn’t be free because of the nightmares he had about that thing that happened a week ago, he was wrong because no one wanted to give him freedom. He had to do something, something that would change his whole world; he had to leave to another country, a country where he could be free. He did it. One night he left. He didn’t know where to go but he had all the necessary stuff: a knife (he made it) water, money, food, and clothes. He was scared, very scared but he had to do it. He had to! He left a note in his house too where he said: “I am leaving, I want freedom, I can’t live here with you, and I will never forget what you did for me, all the good and bad things. I won’t ask to forgive me because I know you won’t”. That was the beginning of the end. His journey has just started.
He walked for days, he was exhausted he couldn’t do anything; he didn’t want to do it anymore. He went north, where his village was, he went there he went to his house his, as his grandma saw him he hugged him so much that his bones sore. She was so grateful to god when he saw him, she wanted to call his parents but he didn’t let her do it, he said that he just passed by and that he needed someone to help him, he was alone for days, for weeks. He slept there for the night, but his grandma couldn’t just let it go, she had to do something, she called his parents but Philip heard her talk, he had to leave very quickly , when his grandma shut the phone down he told her that he would leave right now, she couldn’t do anything ,he let him ,he gave him water , food and some other supplies to take with him too she hugged him for a last time and he left he didn’t know where to go but he left.