"Lune!" Yelled Sky franticly chaseing me as i ran from him through the forest. "Lune! Get ack here!" He screamed. I triped and fell but when i tried to pull up my hoispitle gown they forced me in since the day i was born caught on a tree branch.
"Sheez"I said franticly pulling it loose and riping it down the side, but i dident care. I kept runing untill the tree's cleared out and i was presented with a cliff. Down below the water was roaring with white rapids.
"No where to run little moon." Said Sky loading a tranqulizer gun, but no. Not this time, so i whiped around and jumped into the water. It seemed like years before i hit the unforgiveing river.
It thrashed me around and i could feel my self being torn to shreds by the jagged rocks on the bottom, and only able to see the black waters and the wisp of my hair fluttering around my face, untill i couldent take it anymore, and it all faded to black.
Yes this is going to be a sieries story stay tuned it there will be a new chapter every other day.
hey its actually not bad but heres a tip when writing you should keep a pad of paper with you and a pen at all times so if you get an idea you can write it down and then when you have time work it into your story.