I have been planning a story, and would like to know if anyone would actually want to read it. Heres a review of the story:
Rashi-Ken and Zentay are martial-artist who master in taming their energy to attack their enemies. On a cold Winter day, someone at the Great Tournaments was beating people badly, surpasing the rule that if their down 10 seconds, they're out. But this man, Hesicure, was going too far. As Zentay and Rashi arive, they watch as another close friend gets beaten. Triomun had just been kicked off the Battle Stage. "Ha, I thought this was a FIGHTING tounament" Hesicure said teasingly, "How about some more punching dumbies" He cried out to Rashi and Zentay. "I've gotta' go beat him" Rashi said. As Rashi ran out towards the stage, Zentay cried out "You can't beat him on your own! You know Triomun is far stronger than you!" "Oh well!" Rashi replied. "Then I'm coming, too" Zentay called out as he made his way to fight Hesicure.