paige and zach where best friends but paige had always had a big crush on zach
paige ran up and huged zach as she was crying . zach just stood there like he didnt even care.paige asked zach if she waz pretty an he said no.then paige asked him if he would cry if she walked away he said no then she asked him if he wanted 2 b with her 4ever and he said no
then zach said ur not pretty ur gorgus and if u walked away i wouldnt cry i would kill myself ,and no i dont want 2 b with u 4 ever i need 2 b with u 4ever
Hmm ZombieBestie You should fix the vocabulary, Like
2=To
b= Be
4=for
im= I'm
i= I
zack= Zach
paige= Paige
u= you
ur= Your
You should fix those and it would make better since, but all in all its a very very good story I loved it. =)