This is not just a story off the top of my head its a story i have been working hard on. Your sittin there breathing hard between a carton of apples and a dark corner. 'That was close!you say! Your then deep in the corner thinking about the first time Jacks gang was chasing after her. She was with her father then minding their own buissness when a mystery person grabed her and ran while dragging her away she saw two other men hold her father. She screamed 'DADDY!!' while he was there screaming KIM!!! That was the last time she saw her father. Kim sitting there felt a tear run down her face when she heard footsteps. She quieted down and hid herself in the corner.The footsteps got closer and closer then stopped.Then a strong hand reached down in HER corner and and grabed her. Should i keep writing? -meara09-