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Was it me?
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Ajk 89
POSTED: 18 Dec 2010 09:56
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
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I waited for you, for ever so long,
Ignorant to the acheing feeling of wrong,
Once the opertunity came to,
I beleaved my suffering through,
Then he came allong, stealing you,
Me but a bistander, nothing to do,
I forced a fake smile and said its ok,
That the lord played it out this way,
But as soon as you strode away,
The shine in my eyes faded gray,
I drop to my knees, the tears fall,
Feeling broken and helpless to it all,
We still talk every day,
Though my heart you for slay,
Just being there gives me butterflies,
Emenating from me, laughter rise,
You still break my heart to pieces,
Instead I present the creases,
I love you, no hate for ever shall be,
The queaking thought, Was it me?
-Ajk
Side Note: This is from a male pov.
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Comments
MiaSue
18 Dec 2010 17:50
Ive always enjoyed listening to poetry. The use of words and how they just flow is beautiful and amazing. Great job.
Astra Moon
18 Dec 2010 11:21
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This is really good. Creative, well written, & heart felt. Good job.
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