"uh, That's gross." I stated,"Let's get a sample."
"We did the news brodcast now let's go."Kyle urged me,"The police will be here any minute.
I took a few pictures of the dead Gallow family. Mother, father, brother, and twin sisters were shot to death. The police hypothesized that it was done with a revolver.
I am Maria Malone. I am a reporter that has just crossed the line. When I mean cross the line, I mean the yellow police tape around the house we went under to get in the house. Lately there have been some murders around in this city that I have to get all the information out.
I live two cities over, but the story was so good. I just had to take my chances. I also dragged along Kyle, my cameraman, with me.
As we walked out of the hose thinking of our jackpot, we were stunned by a sudden, bright light. We squinted, trying to adjust to the harsh light.
"Put your hands up!" I heard a man cal out to us,"You are under arrest for trespassing on a crimescene!"
Oh crap, I thought, we were so close to getting away!
accepted, reason: This should prove to be a good story. Juat remember, a space is after all punctuarion marks & after exclamation points. Other then that, you should be good.