Tell me in the comments if this is good if so ill contine this story im gonna do it in parts PS (im a horrible speller)

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!i Chapter 1i!
I was running down the hallway i was late to chemistry like always becouse the hour before i had gym and i always took my time. I came into the room just on time but with my horrible luck as i came running in i sliped and slide into the techers desk spilling the chemicals she had on her desk all over her papers
"Michael!You're gonna be staying after today re-typing all these test!" Mrs.Debuber yelled and as usual everyone was laughing at me i got up and wiped the dust off my pants and walked back to my usual place "The Corner" thats were all rejects like me sit.
"Hey Michael,Bad Luck?" Ashley asked
"Like always you should know that by now ash" Ashley was my best girl/lady friend we've were daycare buddys and buddies every since
"Nice spill man you really pissed Debuber off this time" said david my other bestfriend and same with him we were daycare buddies and buddies every since
"Yea i know man im a real clutz"
"Yes you are Mike, You cant even sit at you're desk with out making Debuber mad" said Bailey the Spoiled B**** of the school everyone hated her exept her friends and all the jocks.
"Nelly! My man whats up!" Tyson yelled he came up to me shock my hand like he dose with everyone but he was my bud too
"Not much just chillin" I replyed
"Whats up with Debuber she looks pissed?" Tys asked
"Talk to this kid" david said pointing at me
"What did you do this time kid?" Tys asked
"Came in slipped, Slid hit her desk spilt chemicals all over her tests." i repiled
"Nice man,Nice" Tys said
"Listen up class today we will be a grim day for one of you students..."
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End of chapter one
Thats the first part tell me what you think thanks for your time