Before reading this you need to know a few things about the format of this story. You will see option boxes like this:
1 the main character will use an option like this:
2* this represents a none dialouge option
3
4
"1" then whatever happens
Now lets begin the story.
"ugh my head... where am I?" ? said as he looked around to see he's on a beach. "Oh your awake" a girl with black hair said. "whats your name?"
1uh can't remember
2john
3*summon a keyboard and type something stupid like "pooface"
"1" "I can't remember" ? said, "oh that's total crap. What's your name?"
dang she's smart
1john
2pooface
3you don't need to know
"1" "My name is john" John said, finally revealing his lame name. "Wow what a boring name. I'm sheila." she responded. "Hey where am I?" John asked. "oh your on the island of calitran." Sheila divulged.
1okaaaay
2thats a weird name
3caliwhat?
"2" "Thats a weird name" John said.
Sheila helped john up and they started to walk off the beach. "This island won it's indepndence from being a island resort town for adults with lots of money and who could dance and drink all night and all day. To a small fishing nation that thrives off it's fried fish sandwhiches."
.......
1what?!
2that's just odd
3oh man i'm allergic to fish(joke)
"2" "Thats just odd" John said. "I know right"sheila responded with a sarcastic look on her face. " Anyway my dad's probably expecting he said something about a guy washed up on the beach," She said. "Whatever"John said casually. Fifteen minutes later they arrived at a small hut, with a strawroof and wooden walls. It looks like it was made out of a island barstand. "Father you expecting someone?"Sheila asked as she opened the door and peered in. "Yeah the mail man. I still haven't gotten my gameinformer, I subscribed like a month ago!" the man inside said. "No some guy who was washed up on the beach"Sheila answered. End of page one tell me if should do more