*Previously* Who iz dis?:/ Um. yew might not remember meh but we went tuh elementary skool 2getha nd i had a HUGE crush on yew lol.
aww. thanx. lol itz meh Armondo.
REALLY! lol i had such a big crush on yew too lol i wuz such a chicken i cud nevr talk tuh yew lol
yea. i was on facebook nd i found Brittany nd we started talking nd she gave meh ur # lol
i was soo sad when yew moved i was lyk i shouldve talked tuh him.
yea meh too. i wish i didnt move. i told my mom to wait until i finished jr high but she said she couldnt. well. not to sound desperate or anything but do you have boyfriend.
no. i dont we broke up 2day.
oh. im so srry.
dont b.
y u guyz broke up.
no i broke up wit him he wuz cheatin on meh.
oh. my mom bought a house out there nd we moved in a couple of days ago nd im transferring to the high skool out there. do yew still live there?
yes! i do. im soo happy now ur going tuh go tuh skool wit me.
um. yea do you want to go see a movie on friday?
yes i wud love to.
"Mindy dinner's ready"
"Okay mom i'll be right down"
so lyk 8.
yea dat sounds good. i gtg ill talk tuh u later. *Mindy goes downstairs* "Mindy! Mindy! Look guess I did at school today?"
"Um you wrestled with a dragon?"
"No silly. I was at recess and I found a praying mantis."
"Eww. Did you pick it up?"
"Uh huh and I put it on a tree so that nobody will step on it."
"That was very nice of you Michael."
"Why do you have that wrapy thingy on your arm Mindy?"
"Because I got hurt and I need to make it better so I went to the doctor."
"I don't like the doctor he gave me a shot and it really hurt."
*The next day* "Mindy hurry up your gonna be late! Do you want a ride from me or not?"
"I'll be right down mom!"
*Mindy grabs her bag and her phone and runs down the stairs and gets into the car and arrives at school and opens her locker and finds roses with a note-* From your secret admirer
Nice job! But I'll suggest try using quotation marks like "←these→" and write something like "said Mandy" or Mandyinsert sentence] etc. But good story keep it going!
thats really good, i see you improved the story with the tags! Very well done.
By my request, please change the grammar to a more "right" writting, without many "yew" "wuz" becuz" "y".
I see you did it for the story and that is not the way you write normally. But some blogmin may think i went crazy featuring it if they don't read the whole story carefully XD.
Thanks for taking in consideration, Keep the good work~~~~ Gleek