Start Mid-summer Paradox By unit12

By @unit12
POSTED: 30 Mar 2011 03:54
CATEGORY: Short Story
FEATURED: Yes (@Haruspex)
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START MID-SUMMER PARADOX
I thought of doing this a long time ago but now I’m finally doing it. So basically this is a kind of interactive story where you chose what you want to happen by picking 1 of 2 choices at the end of the part of the story you read. I think we’ve all read a book like that so have fun trying to get to all the endings. This story is a bit dark so except your character to die more than a few times before getting the “good” ending or the “bad” ending. If you get the bad ending the title will make a lot more sense. Choose wisely, sometimes the story will reward you for being adventurous and risky but sometimes it will kill you. I tried to make all the parts of the story important to read if you want to completely get the whole story keep reading lol.

BLOGMIN!!!! I spent a ton of time planning and writing this story so try it a few times before deciding to accept it or not.

Your adventure starts now!!!

Mid-summer Paradox

It’s a lazy Saturday afternoon, it’s the summer and there’s a big heat wave coming over your area. All of your friends are on a summer vacation and you seem to be the only one within a 5 mile radius. Well, of course, there’s your family but, they were just as boring as watching TV when nothing’s on. So now here you are with nothing to do but watch TV; and guess what? Nothing’s on. So you sit there trying to find the most exciting thing on TV, wishing something actually exciting would happen. You could go complain to your parents but they’d just give you stories about the prune festival again. Mom, Dad, prunes aren’t exciting. Yup. Here you are, sitting and doing nothing. Your brain is about to die of boredom when BOOOOOMFHSESHHSHHSSHAKASHAKASHAKA!!!!!! You feel a huge tremor, bigger than any other you’ve felt before (mostly because your area doesn’t get earthquakes that often.) It only lasts about 20 seconds and all is normal again aside from a few things falling off of shelves and counters. You decide you have nothing to lose.

Go find out what made the tremor (1A)

Ignore it and watch TV (1B)

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Flyguy156
31 Mar 2011 21:55

Wow, that was awesome!
I would be too lazy to write that.

unit12
31 Mar 2011 02:13

as i see it there are 2 halves to the story, the tv half and the tremor half. the half you choose depends on your first choice up there ↑ one half has the good ending and one has the bad and i made it so that the tremor half explains the story of the tv half and so forth so to completley get the story you must read the whole thing

unit12
31 Mar 2011 02:10

you really should try to get the bad ending as much as the good ending, they both explain different parts of the story. if you read every choice you will see the complexity of it all.

Nathanle
31 Mar 2011 00:27

well, i didn't really, die, but "GAME OVERD"

Nathanle
31 Mar 2011 00:25

great, i love things like this, i only died twice before getting the good ending.

unit12
30 Mar 2011 22:19

the glitch hero mentioned is fixed and your comments are appreciated whether good or bad

unit12
30 Mar 2011 22:13

thnks for the heads up hero. im gonna fix

Limxzero
30 Mar 2011 20:53

Nice job.

HeroElKabong
30 Mar 2011 11:06

This is amazing. A huge amount of work has been done, that much is obvious. This blog is definitely the best I've ever seen. Good work!

One small glitch, on 6A, when I tried to go to 8A, it just relinked to 6A.

Epifex
30 Mar 2011 07:36

Wow, a lot of thought has obviously gone into this!
Well done!
I got a good ending

007Jesse
30 Mar 2011 05:35

i wanted to do something like this too, except on forums (using [spoiler] codes) XD greaat job!

unit12
30 Mar 2011 05:30

yessss thanks haru!

Haruspex
30 Mar 2011 05:20

ok, this is awesome. I have wanted to do something like this for a while now, and you went and did it for me.

very awesome.

Start Mid-summer Paradox

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