Dear, keep still, let me look into your eyes.
Darling don't move, let mee see you smile.
Let me hear you laugh, the sound of butteflies riding on raindrops,
Let me hear you sing, The voice of many angels singing their beautiful song.
Dear take my hand and we'll dance off into the sunset,
I swear to you I'll never forget.
These memories I'll cherish forever,
And we'll get through life together.
When I close my eyes, all I see is you, and all that we've been through.
But darling I miss you and wish you were here,
Come back to me and we'll sail away on the ocean so blue and clear.
Though were so many miles apart,
Just close your eyes,
I'm right there with you in your heart,
And I'll stay with you through the night.
Here are some sentences that you may want to check:
"let mee see you smile." <- me (extra e)
"the sound of butteflies" <- butterflies (forgot the r)
"Though were so many miles apart," <- we're (forgot the apostrophe)
Though the poem doesn't seem to take a shape, it flows fairly smoothly. I love the story behind this poem! ^^ Keep writing! (: