My life wasn`t always good. Life didn`t start out good. It was 2001 when my friend got bullied and went psyco on everyone. my mom was visiting that day for lunch and andrew got stuffed in a locker. The principal had found him and took him out.He didn`t want to tattle on anyone, so he didn't speak of it to the principal. That lunch, my mom was eating with us when some kid threw adrews food all over him. Andrew had crack that day. He started screaming and tock out a gun and shoot. He was shooting like crazy, not taking any cation of anything. One of those bullet hit my mom.... I started to scream.There were about 10 people hurt, but ony my mom was dead. I screamed at andrew not caring of what he would do. And then he pointed the gun at me. Right in the forhead. I told him “try me” and he... What you think? That was a preview of my new series The Belief Of A Dream. Should i continue? Please leave comments
Whoo! First comment! lol yeah i can clearly see that its in 1st person so yeah a few spelling and grammer errors here and there but everyone makes mistakes I don't there should be more dialougue throughout the story. Yeah it's really good so far so yeah continue with the series.