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sunsets past
By
JOwhiteDSI
POSTED: 28 Feb 2010 10:02
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
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JIBby2011
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as i sit near setting sun,
i remember you and me,
how many times we used to come, and sit at this same old hill
as i wonder, at the sinking gold, with heavy heart i think,
that you are gone,
just like the sun,
sinking away from me
how many times, i do not know,
i come to this same spot,
an find myself,
absorbed in thought,
of the beauty that i lost
the golden light, reminds me of you, and reflects all the beauty,
of your sweet face,
and your sweet embrace,
and how your laughter charmed
alas but all good things do fade,
and sink like the setting sun,
but you and me will never fade,
like gold set in stone
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JOwhiteDSI
02 Mar 2010 11:30
uh? of course i wrote it!
an it is rythmatic, cs the commas are there for a reason...
JIBby2011
01 Mar 2010 12:44
is this an original piece?
you should try to make it more rhythmic. but for now, no pub.
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