Keep me warm,
Hold me until dawn,
Without you, its true,
I just can't see it through,
You know i care,
So let me be there with you,
It's true, my love.
I wrote this just for my boyfriend. Hope u love it!!!
i like this. i think that after every two stanzas, you should repeat "its true, my love". this will give the poem a more poetic and rhythmic feal. just my oppinion. but for now, its not pub'd. email me when the full version is done.
By @Searra
JIBby2011
