Actually, Astra, in freestyle you can do absolutely whatever you want with your poem and all the letters making it up. No, it may not look pretty, but still, it's legit.
accepted, reason: I almost denied it. But the only issue I see is minor: it lacks capitals. The beginning of every line is supposed to be capital in a poem. As is the word I as you should know from school. Aso, the comma's at the end of each line: they just aren't needed. As for the rest, the form is good, as are the lyrics & spelling. A peece of advice: The last 3 lines would look better if the were a verse. (no skipped line between them)
By Kendrick
Ellis9549
Astra Moon
