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Light Breaks Darkness, part 2
By
@ImagineBlueRoses
POSTED: 11 Jul 2011 06:11
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
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Your touch, your face,
your laugh and your voice,
I wanted them to leave,
but did I have a choice?
Would the memories ever stop?
Would the night never go?
Desperation set in,
deadly and slow.
Life was a burning wound,
each day brought more pain;
darkness seemed inviting,
death seemed a gain.
"God, forgive me!"
I cried, my voice shattering the still.
The wind hit my face
as I ran down the hill.
My feet left the ground,
the water pulled me in,
The pain would be short,
then I'd be with you again.
My eyes slowely closed,
as the hand of Death,
grasped my soul,
stole my breath.
And as my life faded,
I saw my last, fleeting sight-
the first golden ray
of morning's light.
Thank you for reading. If you would like to see a more impacting version, go to YouTube and search under the poem title.
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Comments
ImagineBlueRoses
23 Jul 2011 16:24
Actually, it was a girl, though I didn't specify. Her friend, or lover, whichever, died and she kept living in grief. So she killed herself.
Thegamonmonster
16 Jul 2011 09:24
it's brilliant peom, with a great storyline, but did he have to die?Could he not have realised that light breaks darkness
good poem though!!! (sorry I sound so critical, I do love the peom) Your great at what you do
cody j
11 Jul 2011 13:31
nice
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