sue was walking down the school hallway.she was the mean woman.she had grey hair and she only wears red.sue went in her office.she had a note on her desk.the note said she is going to die.sue screamed.everyone in the school heard her.sue was scared.a teenager with blond hair and a green shirt came in sues office.sue was crying.sue never cried before.the teenager said his name is tom.tom tried to make sue happy but sue was not in the office anymore.tom started to panic.sue was not in the school.where could sue be...episode 2 coming soon
most of these are sentence fragments. i may not write as good as a proffesional, but i can still help you out. first step:make compete sentences.
second step: learn other punctuations.
happy birthday by the way