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Rage

RP Avatar By Mr. Lord Zeus
POSTED: 23 Oct 2011 21:06
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (JABINATOR)
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I sit down for days. 
I think about an idea for days. 
I hate to think
That my thoughts would
Keep me from my dream 
The Bias of your Ways
Keep me from my dreams

Can you see that
Not everyone believes the same as you. 
Can you see that
You're not the only one with thoughts too. 

I type this poem
With my dream in mind
My dream WILL
Be Heard
My Dream WILL
Be Published

My dream is to see you
The same
As
Everyone 
Else
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Comments

Avatar DERPANET
25 Oct 2011 21:10
AWESOME, DUDE! FOR A MOMENT, I THOUGHT YOU WERE REFERRING TO THE VIDEOGAME OF THE SAME TITLE, BUT I DIDN'T EXPECT SUCH BEAUTIFUL RHETORIC STYLE AND IAMBIC PENTAMETER!! WELL DONE, I SAY!!! WELL DONE!!!!
Avatar MaxiMillion
24 Oct 2011 16:38
ლ(ಠ益ಠლ
Avatar MaxiMillion
24 Oct 2011 15:00
Pudding is for geeks.
Avatar Chanishyy
24 Oct 2011 13:09
I love to think,think is a...most excellent part of your brain.
Avatar Winter Icefox
24 Oct 2011 04:18
Raaaageeeeee.
Avatar victimtimizr21
24 Oct 2011 03:28
omg, i believe myself to be correct when i say "why are you plagirizing Dr. martin luther king jrs. speech," ←oozz nozzz the troll has been unleashed upon this innocent blogxD
Avatar MaxiMillion
23 Oct 2011 22:41
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAG
Avatar Supermario1
23 Oct 2011 22:15
nice poem!
Avatar MancarCamoran
23 Oct 2011 21:46
I love free hand poems. Great job.
Avatar Waffle King
23 Oct 2011 21:46
My dream is to have a pool filled with chocolate pudding.
Avatar Mr. Lord Zeus
23 Oct 2011 21:39
Poems don't need rhyme. Look up free verse poems...Your teacher didn't teach that?
Avatar a.smith
23 Oct 2011 21:38
Its got no rythem o.e
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