Cotton Tree By Mr. Lord Zeus

By Mr. Lord Zeus
POSTED: 24 Oct 2011 22:26
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (GleeoK)
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Cotton Tree

Sitting alone in this Cotton Tree
1867.
And I'm sitting here in this Cotton Tree.
Mama and Pa
Picking from this cotton tree
Master says
"Boy Pick Faster"
Pa picked at this Cotton Tree
Till His hands were mighty sore

Master said
"Boy, This cotton tree still
Needs picking"

Pa hates Master
His weird pale skin
Strangely the same as my own.

His long black whip
Ended Pa
Bloody and Hurt
Pa's last words were
"Let my cotton trees live"

I love you Pa
And your Bright white
Cotton Tree

I really hope you like the Blog.
There's many more to come.

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Comments

GleeoK
25 Oct 2011 03:11

i featured it but it said commander did?

???

Mr. Lord Zeus
25 Oct 2011 02:39

Thanks. I'll fill it back in.

Nope.avi
25 Oct 2011 01:55

My comment was deleted, why?

Haruspex
25 Oct 2011 01:24

I agree with Nope, in this situation it represents the historical value of the poem, and keeps it in its timefame properly.

It wasnt used in this poem as a way to just say the word, it actually had a specific purpose.

Sprite
25 Oct 2011 00:37

Very nice.

Mr. Lord Zeus
24 Oct 2011 23:32

Quoth Weegee8:

You're into poems all of the sudden, eh buddeh'?
+1

I've always been into Poems lol, I'm just now posting them on SDK/

Weegee8
24 Oct 2011 23:31

You're into poems all of the sudden, eh buddeh'?

Mr. Lord Zeus
24 Oct 2011 23:26

That's the Point, Blacks didn't know how to spell and there Vocab was Really bad.

The N-Word is used to express how African-American and Slave Owners talked. I'm Black PLUS it's poetry. Get over it.

GleeoK
24 Oct 2011 22:41

A bit short, but very interesting.

o-o looks like a Japamese verse or something...i can't interpret many of it. lol

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