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Dance forever...

RP Avatar By DarkHeartsofLove
POSTED: 29 Dec 2011 01:58
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (Nope.avi)
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Pull me close,
Pull me into your trance.
I think I got an overdose.
All I want to do now is dance.

I want to dance in your arms.
I want to feel your body mingle with mine.
I don't really mind that in my mind there are warning alarms.
I know that other girls say you're not kind.

I don't really care.
All I know is that I want my chance.
I would rather take this as my own personal dare.
All I want to do now is dance.

You smiled at me as if I was perfect.
The rhythm of the music played as we danced.
You whispered in my ear that I was worth it.
You slowly and smoothly pulled me into your trance.

I am yours for tonight my darling.
You have me in your grasps so don't let me go.
I hope you notice the way I am dancing is alarming.
You have shown me what it is like for a heart to be sewn.

I am falling for you.
I wish this dance could last forever.
Catch me is all I want you to do.
Don't let this dance end, nope not ever.
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Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
30 Dec 2011 00:31
Quoth rickyLoLz:
Best poem on Paint.

Thanks^-^
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 17:23
** Mr. Poe. Lol. Sorry Iput his middle name ^-^
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 17:00
Quoth DjStellar:
I wonder if u were ever inspired by anyone who is famous for poetry like Egar Ellen Poe (forgot how 2 spell his name)

...Mr.Allan? Yes. I was inspired to start writing poetry because of him. ^^ Also Emily Dickinson.
Avatar DjStellar
29 Dec 2011 16:34
I wonder if u were ever inspired by anyone who is famous for poetry like Egar Ellen Poe (forgot how 2 spell his name)
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 08:48
Quoth Astra Moon:
This is great, you have a lot of talent. Wonderful form, It's rare to find poetry on here written in correct format. Many just write it like an ordinary paragraph (that irks me). As a poet myself, I see some thing I personally wouldn't do, but I'm to much of a perfectionist, & I tend to scrutinize everything. It's wondeful.


Thankyou ^^ so very much.
Avatar Astra Moon
29 Dec 2011 08:46
This is great, you have a lot of talent. Wonderful form, It's rare to find poetry on here written in correct format. Many just write it like an ordinary paragraph (that irks me). As a poet myself, I see some thing I personally wouldn't do, but I'm to much of a perfectionist, & I tend to scrutinize everything. It's wondeful.
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 07:33
Quoth Nips09:
Yeah! You write great poems LIKE A BOSS.



Sorry, that was really lame ↑... xDDD


But otherwise, great job foo! lol

xD thanks lmao
Avatar Nips09
29 Dec 2011 07:22
Yeah! You write great poems LIKE A BOSS.



Sorry, that was really lame ↑... xDDD


But otherwise, great job foo! lol
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 06:23
Quoth imcool3723:
Who wouldn't like this? (Jerks won't) Your really good. :3


Lol thanks(:
Avatar imcool3723
29 Dec 2011 06:11
Who wouldn't like this? (Jerks won't) Your really good. :3
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 05:40
Quoth kaitlynlovesyou:
awe :] this is my favorite poetry eva!lol

lolz Cx thanks!
Avatar kaitlynlovesyou
29 Dec 2011 05:39
awe :] this is my favorite poetry eva!lol
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 05:33
Quoth Emford01:
My favorite poet

Omg... REALLY? O:
Thanks..(:
Avatar Emford01
29 Dec 2011 05:29
My favorite poet
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 04:12
Quoth jesslo:
I never said it was wrong. It just reminded me of allstar weekend.

Huh? I just said I didn't know the song or the band :/
Avatar jesslo
29 Dec 2011 04:06
I never said it was wrong. It just reminded me of allstar weekend.
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 03:55
Quoth Admiral:
I think I rather quite like this one.

Thanks. ^^
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 03:13
Quoth jesslo:
Dance Forever is a song by All-star weekend!

Sorry I don't think I know that band lol. ^^
Avatar jesslo
29 Dec 2011 03:11
Dance Forever is a song by All-star weekend!
Avatar DarkHeartsofLove
29 Dec 2011 03:03
Thanks! ^^ Sorry I didn't know how to spell it so I took a shot at it. I'll fix it!
Avatar Nope.avi
29 Dec 2011 03:00
*Overdose

Otherwise, great work. You're a wonderful poet.
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