Hey guys! Here is a little poem I wrote a few months back on a peice of paper that I just found. It's not that good, but tell me what you think!


This is a story about a girl,
Who's world came crashing down on her.
It burned to the ground,
Everything was crashing down on her.
The sad story of the very young girl.

Her heart was all broken and torn,
When all she could do was moarn.
Tears in her eyes,
All this beautiful girl wanted was to die.
Oh the sad story of the poor, poor little girl.

She sliced open her wrist,
While she sat alone in the cold mist.
She started to bleed out,
And the young girl faced death by herself no doubt.
The very sad story of the poor, beautiful, young girl.

A man found her laying there,
He took her into the nearest hospital for immediate medical care.
The stranger sat at her side untill she was awake.
The girl realized she had almost met a very bad fate.
The sad story of the girl.

The man took her in as his own.
There she found that real affection was shown.
He had no one else to take care of.
It was just him, the girl, and the holy spirit as a dove.
The new beginning for that sad girl.