thankyou @GleeoK

I rejected this blog because it was not newsworthy. But if you hadn't submitted it, i wouldn't had commented on it!

And Its always ok to submit a blog asking for feedback. Don't worry about that.

Just checked some of your blogs.

Well, you are improving, the more you write the more you will improve! You still need to improve parts of your writing, like setting up arguments and reasons of why you are saying is true, is better, is worse, is a lie.

Like:

"The Playstation Vita has more capabilities than the 3DS."

Why the Playstation Vita has more capabilities than the 3DS? Why the 3DS is an inferior device?

You have to set a point on everything, be detailed. You can be specific, you can be vague if you want and focus on something else in that subject, you can let the weak parts of your point pass unperceived and focus on what will enforce it, let your imagination fly!

Continue writing, if you love it. If you love it, you will always get better and better, but if you stop, then its all gone.


I write a lot of blogs here, I think the personality of my blogs earned me my blog moderating job here, and not only my wish to be a volunteer in this site. Now look at the first blogs i made in this site. Aren't them horrible?! See now? I improved. Because i love writing.

If you want feedback on any of your blogs, ask me. I'm always checking my messages and blogs submitted for feature. Don't feel bad because you didn't get many comments in your blogs, i know they are important for feedback and to feel the reader's reactions, but if your blog didn't get featured then its most likely not receiving enough views for that, its not because your work was bad.

And a declined blog is not always a bad blog, sometimes it was not worth a feature. This means its content was not suited for the featured list and the moderator thought there is more important content from other users.

And Keep writting! I gave you plenty of reasons for that : )