Please note that I am still going to make that top ten list that I said I'd do in the comments of banman's blog. I am a perspireing artist and would like as much constructive criticism as I can get. But since I want to be as creative as possible, I will write possibly the first second person story on here. Writing in second person was hard, I almost wrote in first person a few times.

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You wake up in your servants corridors at the Happy Sun inn and casino. 'Happy' isn't the best way to describe it, the casino's phrase is 'Make your nightmares vanish.' While your nightmares do vanish, it is only because of the charm that the doorway is made out of, it makes it so that you forget your fears. Unfortunately for the staff, this includes yourself, people think that it is a place without any laws. The maids going around serving the beverages are required to know a certain type of attract magic to keep themselves from getting into problems with the visitors. After pondering about your life for a few moments, you get ready for the day. Going out the door of the servants corridors, which is an entirley different building, a chill goes down your spine due to the cold morning air.
"Jace!" you hear a voice call to you, and you turn around acordingly.
It was a higher up, with his poofy blue bow and his fluffy pink cat on his shoulders. "What is it?" you respond after noticing who it was. "Your needed in the casino." he told you. Your face had a confused look on it when he told you this, "But, I thought I wasn't allowed in that part of the building, I'm too young."
"You are the only one that can do this. The old blackjack dealer is in the hospital, and you are the only other staff member that knows how to play." he said to you. His look made it so that you couldn't say no. "I'll go freshen up." you say in seeming defeat, but on the inside you were jumping for joy. You always wanted to go into the casino part of the inn, but your too young. You made your way back inside, and into the bathroom. You look in the mirror and sigh that you might not be able to get you dark green hair looking good enough to look more mature. [i]Well, better get to work![/i] you say to yourself, pulling out a comb. Eventually, you manage to get your messy hair in order and then you put a casino uniform on in your room.
You worked the next few hours talking to the visitors, and playing black jack as the dealer. After awhile, you see you sister walk by. Your sister is a maid, and the only one in your family who knows magic. You turn away, if she blows your cover as the black jack dealer, the owner could get into trouble, as you are two years under the legal age to be in the casino. "That ones a looker, she's new too, I'll seduce her, just watch." you over-heard one of the player say to another player. The player then walked over to your sister, his eyes pinned to her lean figure. As he gets to your sister he took his hands and sent them down your sister's figure. You could tell from where you were standing what he was doing, he was using attract magic. You stare almost helplessly as your sister turns around. At this moment, as you look into your sister's helpless blue eyes you knew what you had to do. You ran up to the player that was seducing your sister, and punched him square in the face.

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Should I continue in second person?