Again, I don't get it. The part about the random number generator was extremely hard to understand, and although it is good to use more...interesting vocabulary, overdoing it like you have done thus far will make it too hard to understand. This counts ESPECIALLY in the part aboud the random generator. Its entire concept is rather hard to grasp, and I think this novel will have a very limited following.From what I can tell, they use random number generators to change the frequency (or waves in other words, think sound) of the force feild of their ship so that they can pass through their planet's force feild. Although, I'm not too sure because I kinda spaced out at that part. I'll read this part again.
Again, I don't get it. The part about the random number generator was extremely hard to understand, and although it is good to use more...interesting vocabulary, overdoing it like you have done thus far will make it too hard to understand. This counts ESPECIALLY in the part aboud the random generator. Its entire concept is rather hard to grasp, and I think this novel will have a very limited following.