Hahaha! The people! They are trying to trick me! They are imposing some strategem upon me. But I'm not falling for it. I know what they're up to. They are trying to get me in that house on my own and then they are going to kill me. Hahahahahaha! The stupidity!
I've always been a good poker player. Nobody ever knows exactly what I've got planned. But I always know what they have. I can read people like a book. And I know what they are up to. I had to be careful though, I didn't want them thinking that I knew.
So I picked up a baseball bat and pretended to nervously open the door. I watched how it slammed behind me and I pretended to jump. Somebody walked through the bathroom doors. I immediately knew they were planning to kill me in that room. Then I remembered, that figure staring at me through the window. I walked up the stairs holding a bat while pretending to tremble. I opened the room. I saw a frail woman looking through the window. I knew that killing her would stop this ruse. So I slowly crept up and with a swift blow I forced her forwards right through the window.
The children quickly ran out of the room. The house in my mind flashed. I looked into the distance and saw the oak tree and just behind it, that house. I knew that the people in the house weren't expecting that move. But they were, I heard noises outside and coming upstairs. I had been beaten at my own game. The house was smarter than I thought. It stared at me. I quickly raced downstairs with the other people. They didn't know yet. I ran through the door and all the way to the house. And when I entered it, they played one last card.
They made me go into the bathroom, just like last time. But no, I walked upstairs. And there was no figure in the room upstairs. But I slowly walked to the window and I glared at someone sat there. I made him come closer and I stared at him. Then I left the room. I wanted to end his life. He's the mastermind behind this ruse. I knew it. But when I eventually found the front door, he had gone. I went back inside and slept in one of the beds.
Anyway if you read a story out loud, you can tell,if its well written. to be honest, it wasnt the best but i think its still interesting. ccould be improved a bit :o still great :]