What am I? By DarkShadows

By DarkShadows
POSTED: 07 Jun 2012 03:24
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (Astra Moon)
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Chain my hands in iron
Cover my lips with tape
Shut me in the blackest room
With no hope of escape

Leave me with my mumbles
Slurred words and breaths
Secrets slowly leaking
As the reaper collects its debts

Cobwebs from in corners
Tension on my mind
Eyes darting back and forth
But darkness keeps me blind

Reality quickly fading
My mouth has gotten dry
I am nothing but the vivid truth-
Locked between a lie

I dont really know why I wrote this. but I thought it would be a cool idea to tell a perspective from Truth as if it were a person

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Comments

Willy Wonka
30 Oct 2012 19:48

I love it!!

christinap
02 Aug 2012 15:08

Thats really good I love reading things like this it brings a smile to my face I mean really You're a lot better then I am keep it up you're doing a great job and I love to see and read the new things that you write ^_^

RocketshipRyler
31 Jul 2012 01:54

Very clever. My turn. Speak me, tell me, set me free, I'll help you if you'll help me. You'll escape from punishment, You know there is no harm in it. It's only a little tiny thing, No one will notice, no one will see, Say it loud, so they'll believe... Good! You're done! See, that was easy! Now let me introduce you to my friend, Her name is Guilt. She's with you to the end.

doglover456
07 Jun 2012 15:32

Is it an insane person? YES!

Astra Moon
07 Jun 2012 15:22

Accepted, Reason: Although it's a bit short, it's.....captivating. It reminds me of something Evanescence would sing.

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