Explained and descriptive are two different things.
Very hectic. I kept confusing as to who was talking. The reason Richard told Hunter he was his dad defeats the purpose of keeping Hunter from experiencing too much grief. Telling him right then and there would give Hunter a big time weepy session. :l
Just saying.
Sorry. I'm mean. llC
Quoth TheWildwoodDancequote]Very hectic. I kept confusing as to who was talking. The reason Richard told Hunter he was his dad defeats the purpose of keeping Hunter from experiencing too much grief. Telling him right then and there would give Hunter a big time weepy session. :l
Just saying.
Wow that was amazing. ^^ It was really interesting..sad and good at same time. Your a good author.