Much is to be said of this upcoming book. It's been an idea for the longest time so I think it's about time to start it up. As most of you know, I normally had done books based on the mechs in Code Headhunter but for now I have stepped from it to bring forth another setting that might achieve a higher outlook than what has been received. To start off I will explain some key points that will go into effect.
Delving into the Plot! The time period is in the 22xz period which indirectly references the 2200's, about the time of future tech. Bratmos, the "Floating Islands", sits up in the sky where most Neve'l(Humans) live in harmony. It is considered the Last Sanctuary for it's peace of mind from the rest of the world, although, it appears to not last as long as some would believe. Out of the blue, people start disappearing to never be heard of again. No one notices the upheaval that has sprung forth. Gangs, mobs, and silent assassins lurk the streets of the almost-perfect nation in hiding from the outer world. It's almost time for them to break out and create a coup d'état.
Too many events happen at once causing complete despair: A man who seeks approval of his inventions, A woman who kills for fun, A treading terror that spreads like a disease, A lasting pain and fear among the people. All lead to destruction.
The story fades into the inventing man whose creations bring more havoc than happiness.
Bratmos, "Floating Islands" Bratmos is a huge land mass that became the nation for the Neve'l. Due to it's gravitational spires in the corners of the nation, it has kept the land afloat above the Earth, far from harm. The goddess of rock, Zeneo, had separated the land from the Earth in 15000 BC when she noticed a plague that had spread among the dissolving Pangaea. The Pacific Ocean was it's inhabitance or at least it had been until it was lifted into the sky to be isolated from the world to be known as the perfect creation. Bratmos is also known as the "Revolving Nation" due to it's cycling and shifting landmass that breaks every season. Most cities and states end up disappearing and reappearing according to their time zone. It was the way Zeneo had wanted it, to keep everything new.
Protaganist(s) Malaki Zebeo: 40 year old man who lives off of the rock formations in the far reaches of the Hanging Chysill Mountains. He is known to be a wise coot even for his age but he is one that shouldn't be ignored.
Dekryo Motask:21 year old man who is known as the inventor of the Lik Ros'poli stones where they allow complete visions of the future to be seen with a single touch.
Zeben Resin: A man who considers himself to be just another body to the world. With his training with a sword he becomes a valuable adversary
Long Chi: Victory is all she seeks. This 19 year old woman travels from city to city searching for the secret to life, so far she has not found it.
Shi'iBae Livou: The perfect creation of mind and body. She is known for her actions and decisions. Her behavior may deceive others but she is a force to not be messed with in time of need.
Well, I hope you liked the idea. Tell me what you want to see or want me to remove.
Nice, but I don't think much will drastically change in the world (like floating islands) after 200 years...
Sniped Hearts
12 Mar 2013 23:39
In reply to DragonSlayer9
Bratmos had already been formed way back in the 150 million BC as a singular landmass that took part of Pangea. The goddess of rock took her creation, after seeing it slowly become corrupt, and sent it into the sky. It caused Pangea to separate into its distinct parts which is how we have Earth now. Our tectonic plates are slowly coming back together over the time period, signaling that Bratmos would return soon enough.
Sniped Hearts
12 Mar 2013 23:23
In reply to DragonSlayer9
This is from a different dimension. See, things are built off a different perspective . The more different they are, the more likely two key points will change.
Honestly, I couldn't get into Code Headhunters. I don't know why, but I just couldn't. Despite how interesting it sounded. This, as well, seems interesting and I'm looking forward to the first chapter.