Sorry I ate the bacon, but I wrote you this story instead. Enjoy!
Once upon a time a boy named Zack was riding the bus home from school. He was sitting in his seat talking to his buddies when he noticed it was his stop. He said bye to all his friends and walked down the driveway.
He went inside his house and noticed no one was home. He decided to get his homework done first. So he did his howework for like 10 minutes. Then he decided to go out and play basketball.
Zack went outside to get his basket ball. But when he got outside, he saw a very unexpected sight: There was a tiger on the basketball court.
The boy was scared to death. He ran for it. He ran to a bridge. He was running toward the other side of the bridge.
When he finally reached the other side of the bridge he saw that the ends of the bridge went up to prevent cars coming through. He checked his watch. Sure enough it said 6:00. 6:00 was when they closed the bridge.
He was trapped in a bridge with a tiger and had no clue whatsoever on how to escape. He had no choice, there was no other way: He jumped off the bridge.
He swam for a few minutes. Then he found a box he used a knife he found in his pocket to cut a small door like hole in the side of the box and crawled inside.
A few weeks after 'it' happened Zack went for a swim. He was a fair few feet from his box when he saw a shark. Hmm... last time I ran into a dangerous animal, I jumped off a bridge. But there isn't a bridge here, he thought to himself. He tried to swim away but, it was too late. His knife lay in the box until...
I just had the best b-day ever! (yes, yesterday was my b-day. Well, not technically. We were just celrbrating it then because my real birth is on the first day of school)
Denied, Reason: It lacks an interesting storyline. You need something more to keep the audience interested. This seems more of a summary written by a boy who was told to write about his daily events for homework rather then a creative story for people to enjoy.