James sat in the steel foldable chair, with his head between his knees. "What Am I gonna do?... I can't remember..." he, said; thinking back to five minutes ago. "That girl.. Who was she? Does she know more about me?" James looked up with a Miserable look on his face and sighed.
("why are you so sad, Great warrior?" James looked up. Seeing nothing he assumed it was his imagination. "Great.. Now I'm Hallucinating.." James, sighed again. ("I am not Imaginary! Don't be rude, Paradox! I assume you lost your memory, so I will forgive you." Slowly an orb of purple light with a black fuzzy catlike tail appeared in front of James' face; looking quite smug. "W-WHAT THE?!" James, stammered. "Who are you, and why'd you call me Paradox?!" He, said; staring at the orb.
("I'm Sarmoni your friend from your home world. Now listen. This is important! You are the son of Time and Reality, and your real name is, Paradox. This world and everything in it are going to turn into darkness and misfortune. If we don't stop it." Sarmoni, stated.
"How do I know this is all true?" James, asked suspiciously. ("How many floating purple orbs have you talked too? Huh?" James looked at her just realizing it "Good point... Go on.." James, said; looking kinda shot down. ("Ok, so-" "Wait!" James interrupted "If my parents are so special; why don't they just stop it?"
("Because! The Dark Empress, Chaos, stole there powers and is using them to her advantage, and she's coming for you, Paradox. If you die.. it's all over.." she, said; taking a breath. ("Five years ago your parents sent you here to earth to study the ways of the humans and learn their purpose, But Chaos is here, and will stop at nothing until the earth's Dimensional Structure is out of wack! Nothing will make sense!" Suddenly Sarmoni starts to slowly fade away. ("I have to go... Or I'll fade away forever. I'll be back. Be careful, Paradox! I can sense that Chaos is somewhere around here! You'll know she's nearby when things get distorted and the air gets thick! Good Luck, Paradox!" she said as her light grew dimmer.
"Sarmoni, are you ok?! W-Wait! Please don't go! I have more questions!" James, cried as he gently reached out to hold her tail, but as he did his hand went through and she disappeared. "N-No..." James, sighed; Beginning to notice the people in the room staring at him. He looked at them and stammered. "Um... uh... I was practicing for drama class." Everyone in the room smiled, and either nodded or lightly clapped in approval, and went back to what they were doing; James wondered how he remembered drama class and not his name. "And obviously they couldn't see, Sarmoni. Interesting." he, thought. "Hmm.. I better get going.."
James walked toward a hallway leading to a case of stairs. Looking to his left he noticed a painting that started to melt. "W-What?... Wait.. the air... It feels thick!" James looked forward again and watched the staircase begin to intertwine on itself, and spiral back. Like a hallway and a curly fry put together. "Oh. Crud..." James, said; as the air got thicker and thicker "I'm dead..."
That's it for now. Sorry it felt rushed. If it didn't I would appreciate it if you'd leave a comment telling me if you thought it was rushed or not. The first one I tried to right of it got deleted cause my profile logged out by itself. So this one, I thought, wasn't as good as the first. More coming soon. Hope you enjoyed this one. Bye
I almost didn't find this. When you submit a blog you should either submit it the day you started it or copy and paste it into a new one, otherwise it'll show up low down on the list if it's featured. As far as I know it isn't against any rules to submit an old blog, but it'll probably go unnoticed.
Also, you should work on your paragraph structure. Right now this sort of looks like a mess. It's a lot more appealing to the eye if it's split up into more than one continuous block of text.