Hello! So, this is my first story, so please give me feed-back! I really hope you guys like it! Also you should check out the polls I sent out, like the 'What Hogwarts House Is The Best?' (*cough* Griffindor *cough*) Anyway, lets get started on the story. I will write most of my stories in first person- tell me if you like it or not...
It started like all my other dreams did. Kind, unsuspecting. This time I was on a hill, watching the clouds and picking out shapes. I saw a flash of red out of the corner of my eye, but I stupidly ignored it. Then I saw a face in the clouds. It was so detailed, but that was not a good thing. It's right eye was sewned shut. It had two horns, but the left one was broken so that it only stood one inch out of the figure's head. The eye and the horn created an asymetrical balance. A second too late I realised what was happening. The face-like cloud came closer and closer until it became solid, slamming into me, it's teeth sinking into my face.
I woke up with a start, screaming. My mother rushed in, gathering me into a hug.
"It was all a dream," she assured me. Then why could I still hear the evil voice's laughter? And why was I the only one who could see the face outside of my window?
So, what do you think? I think it's good for my first try, but I won't know unless you comment! I don't know what I'm going to write next. Maybe something that explains why Griffindor is the best house? Mwa-ha-ha! Anyway, thanks for reading! And, tell me if you want another chapter! Bye!
-Rainbow
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