Wolves By cdog3789

By cdog3789
POSTED: 23 Aug 2019 02:28
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (Asparagus)
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This is somethin' I wrote last year when I was bored in Seminar. :/ Enjoy?

Howling, biting, snarling mouths, thank god for your safe house.

Think of what it must feel like to be a mouse, Terrified, heart racing. Running from flashing teeth, From blood shot eyes, and foaming muzzles.

On a full moon, alone in your house, Hear the throaty call of wolves, inviting you to step outside.

Sure, wolves are cute creatures, But they are masters of the night, able to bring you down without much of a fight.

Think about stepping outside, only to find a pack of wolves only 15 meters by. Calling you to them.

Think of a cold miserable hell outside. Think of snow, white and red, splotched with blood. See Steaming red muzzles, and glowing eyes, watching you hungerly. Ask yourself, "Do I really want to get to know Wolves?"

Feel the pain of sheared limbs, shredded muscles. The bitter sting of tears, lying on a bed of snow.

The agony of broken bones, marrow oozing out. A cracked skull, brain ripped leaving.

Think of a ripped stomach, organs slipping out, and think your last thought, "Why did I ever leave my house?"

Please, no flames. I know it's not good, but It's a long poem for me. Maybe tips and/or suggestions?

+7 -0

cdog3789
29 Apr 2023 05:15

cringe

cdog3789
03 Aug 2022 05:15

cringe

cdog3789
26 Feb 2022 22:10

cringe

cdog3789
26 Feb 2022 22:09

cringe

Dynasty
07 Feb 2021 17:22

I am in love with your blogs.

cdog3789
08 Feb 2021 01:35
In reply to Dynasty

WaHT??

Maybe I should write more heh~

Dynasty
08 Feb 2021 02:36
In reply to cdog3789

Yeah yeah you should ^w^ I love em

cdog3789
08 Feb 2021 03:42
In reply to Dynasty

Pppppperhaps

Sun+Moon
23 Aug 2019 14:29

This is amazing. Graphic. But amazing. Beautifully written. I love it

cdog3789
23 Aug 2019 14:34
In reply to Sun+Moon

Wow, thanks!

Sun+Moon
23 Aug 2019 14:36
In reply to cdog3789

You're so talented! (As if I haven't told you already xD)
You should enter a poetry competition

I bet you would win.
This is skill and talent, mixed in with a bit of country and dog!

cdog3789
23 Aug 2019 14:45
In reply to Sun+Moon

Oh uh, *blush*

Draconid_Jo
24 Aug 2019 06:02
In reply to cdog3789

He's right, you know.

cdog3789
24 Aug 2019 15:27
In reply to Draconid_Jo

She*

Draconid_Jo
24 Aug 2019 23:31
In reply to cdog3789

Yeah, lol, I didn't even think about that until after my battery died yesterday, lol.

I really need to pay more attention to peoples' genders here, as this isn't the first time I've messed up like that.
(It's beginning to become a recurring problem with me, lol.)

Draconid_Jo
23 Aug 2019 13:06

This is DEFINITELY a very good Poem, and I'm saying that as a person who both admires Wolves, and feels sad about what we Humans have done to them.

Many people hate Wolves, because they fear them, like most ferocious Predators, but the very same things most people fear about them, is precisely what I admire about them.

Most people who want to protect Wolves (which are VERY Endangered, BTW) try to talk about Wolves as misunderstood creatures, who are completely harmless to us Humans.
(Which is true, for the most part.)

But in my mind, the fact that Wolves are fearsome Predators isn't something we should try to deny, or run away from, but something we should embrace, and admire about them, as it's a part of what they really are, as well.
(I would also say the same applies to my favorite category of Animal: Sharks.)