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Merry Christmas!

E Avatar By @cdog3789
POSTED: 23 Dec 2019 18:04
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (@Luisjo96)
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This is almighty short, but as a christmas present to all of you, I tried my first haiku and Tanka. As you can see, the haiku is about Santa and christmas! The Tanka is about an igloo I built last year and how I love snow. Remember, this is my first time and I tried as hard as I could. And with that, this is my gift to you! Thank everyone for being so nice to me on paint, you guys'll talk whenever and to be honest, I consider everyone on paint, family. Thank you!
Also uhm, if you have any suggestions for further types of poems, feel free to comment!

Enjoy.


Santa- A Haiku

Joyful Christmas Day
A dear merry Santa laughs
Inside the Front Door.


Igloo- A tanka poem

I love my igloo
It is just so warm and snug
With an open door
And a short chimney as well
When it snows I am happy.

Pie- A haiku

Jolly Christmas Time
A Tasty Pumpkin Pie sits
Near the large Glazed Ham.

So how was it? Good, bad? Let me know! Thank you for reading!
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Avatar popuko115
31 Dec 2019 17:53
I have a question. How do u change your profile photo
Avatar cdog3789
06 Dec 2020 05:25
In reply to popuko115
n00b
Avatar cdog3789
22 Apr 2020 16:17
In reply to popuko115
Heck, I never replyed ;-;
Avatar popuko115
22 Apr 2020 16:18
In reply to cdog3789
jeez this was a while ago XD
Avatar cdog3789
22 Apr 2020 18:27
In reply to popuko115
Yeah, I never noticed because it was on my birthday, I was out of state.
Avatar popuko115
22 Apr 2020 21:40
In reply to cdog3789
oh. well ur birthday is more important than answering the noob version of me's question XD
Avatar cdog3789
22 Apr 2020 22:07
In reply to popuko115
xD
Avatar popuko115
31 Dec 2019 17:51
U good man. I can barely find anyone here. Wanna chat sometime?

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Avatar popuko115
06 Dec 2020 20:03
In reply to popuko115
why did i sound so creepy XD
Avatar cdog3789
07 Dec 2020 01:29
In reply to popuko115
because n00bness lmao
Avatar popuko115
07 Dec 2020 16:34
In reply to cdog3789
probably XD
Avatar Draconid_Jo
25 Dec 2019 00:13
I like these, and I'm very glad that you submitted them.

Merry Christmas!
Gemini Guardian
24 Dec 2019 04:55
ooh, these are short & sweet.

why not do one about the meals you get to enjoy during the holidays? hehe
Avatar cdog3789
24 Dec 2019 16:50
In reply to Gemini Guardian
I'll try! (:
Gemini Guardian
24 Dec 2019 16:57
In reply to cdog3789
you can do it, yessss
Avatar cdog3789
24 Dec 2019 16:59
In reply to Gemini Guardian
Like that?
Gemini Guardian
24 Dec 2019 18:12
In reply to cdog3789
yess. that one's nice
Avatar cdog3789
24 Dec 2019 18:13
In reply to Gemini Guardian
Why thank youN
Avatar heaven.is.a.joke
23 Dec 2019 20:12
Aw these are cute haha
Avatar cdog3789
23 Dec 2019 21:46
In reply to heaven.is.a.joke
Thank you!
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