On febuary 6,2010 I was in a car crash...i had a best friend and I thought we where gonnaa be together forever but sadley one morning every thing changed.my friend called if I wanted to go to the river with her so I agreed.she picked me up minutes later we had a good time swimming but when it was time to go my friend's dad was drunk so he drove anyway and all of a sudden he was going at speed 100 I remember us screeming but then I fainted and the next thing I know I wake up in a hospital with my liver in pieces my arm broken and my face full of bruses they operated me and when the whole hospital thing was over they called me to this office so I went a few weeks after my accident.there they told me that we where driving at a 100 speed level and that the car rolled or turned 4 times and my friend went flying out the window and broke the back bone of her neck...i coudnt belive what they where telling me! I asked if she was okay and they said she had passed away...i felt like my heart had broken I was really sad because she was my buddy!
accepted, reason:Though it's still lacks punctuation, it's much easier to understand. Thank you. This is an important message about druken driving. It needs to get out.
denied, reason: I can tell this means a lot to you & I really want to accept it, but I just can't. The grammar & punctuation are atocious. The way it's written makes it somewhat hard to understand. If you fix it, I will feature it.