“ Today is a day I always dread at the beginning of every school year.” I mutter to myself, due to the fact of me hearing footsteps. “ Hi Slake.” I hear from small little voice whisper. I whip around startled, to see Rulia. Rulia was different from other seventeen-year-old girls at Bradford High; she has electric blue eyes that occasionally change to purple during storms. Her hair is black with a portion of gray mixed in. I sigh with delight and say. “Hi Rulia.”
She smiles at me and asks. “What are you doing?” In delightful thoughts I reply with. “Nothing really just trying to stay out of school today. What about you?” Rulia shrugs and replies. “Nothing… Is it because today is Monday? I came because I could smell you…” I reply with a smile and laugh, and say.” I smell that good?” She replies with a shrug and says.” Sometimes you do and sometimes you don’t.”
I chuckle and say.” I never noticed, not once.” We both giggle and poke at each other’s sense of humor. And I learn something… Something very important. This knowledge is probably important in the close approaching future.
I figure out how I feel about Rulia. I understand my feelings for a girl for the first time. I see Rulia pull out a note from her pocket. She whispers.” Read this after school. Don’t let anyone see it, ok?” I agree with a nod. Knowing what it says.
“ Anyways.” I hear someone say. I turn around to see Luke… Flirting with Rulia. I see Rulia’s face, which was looking at me. She seemed enlightened to see me, which made me smile. My horrible luck was sprung when Luke turned around. Luke is a brawny guy, who is always flirting with Rulia. He has grey eyes, and black hair… But enough about him…
When he sees me he gets red. He slams me into a tree. He snarls out.” What are you staring at, small fry?” To my surprise I grab his wrists and hiss. “ Not your hideous face that’s for sure.” To tell you the truth I ‘m small but I’m just barely taller than Rulia, I’m at least 6 inches taller. So yeah I’m mad.
He turns even darker red and opened his mouth to make a comment. But I spat right into his mouth. I know it was stupid. Is rage increased and says.” Your dead.” He throws me to the side and gives me time to stand. When I do he runs full steam at me, and I wait then I step 3 steps to the right, he tries three times and to everyone’s surprise… I grab his neck on his last try.
I hear many gasps, and even more of them when I slam him into the ground. I bend down and hiss. “ Never talk to me like that again. Got it?” He nods his head whimpering. I decide to not be a jerk, so I offered to help him up. Thankfully, he accepts he finally stopped whining.
Everyone cleared out moments later. There is at least ten minutes left. I notice Rulia walking towards me and it started to rain, hard. I watch, as her eyes turn purple. She runs into my arms. And I see what’s wrong… She is bruised very badly. I snarl and I guess my eyes turned red, I ask “ What happened?” But she doesn’t answer. Rulia finally replies to me… And the answer made me curse.” You attacked by an enemy? She looked at me.” Yes, but don’t worry I disposed of him.” This on the other hand made calm down. You see the humans have been at war with the Cray-Koon (A wolf pack) for a while. I took her Home and went home myself.
I took the note out and read it.
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Dear, Slake Feb. 15, 1998
I have observed you since third grade, and I feel like I must ask this way. Well I have seen you grow up and become stronger. I figured out how I feel about you, and I love you. I wanted to ask you to St. Xocolates days. Which is tomorrow. So will you? Tell me tomorrow, ok?
Sincerely,
Rulia Shystone
I gaped knowing she felt the same… Wendy came up stairs and asked.” Slake, what are you doing?” I reply with a smile, Wendy looked a lot like Rulia; She is just older and less cheerful. She didn’t necessarily like many things. But she loved me a lot. But I guess I can deal with her rules. I smile and say. “ Rulia, asked me out.” She smiles and says.” I am glad for you.” I notice she is grinning and ask.” What’s wrong? You seem upset.” She replies. “It’s nothing.” I sigh and say. “Ok if you say so… G’night.” She smiles and says.” Good night little brother.” And she walks off.
I think to myself.” She is so lonely…and I rubbed it in my face.” I lay down and I watch the ceiling. Lesson to myself… I hate being a shadow dweller. After awhile I guess I fall asleep.
When I awoke. I was smiling and out the door
I cringed when wolves came into it -.-
Plus, you should write in the tense which seems most natural. Since you're constantly changing to past tense you're obviously more comfortable with that than present.
Also, it's better than most of the noob-fiction on here, but it's still not written well.