Okay so I wrote this and plan on expanding it but this is really recent and yea I would appreciate feedback :3 thank you for reading

I feel my bones growing painful and weak
Lips are dry and chapped
My skin pale and bleak
"How long will this last?"
Pacing around in circles, isn't helping my mind
Feeling cold and ruined
Nothing is helping me this time
"When will I begin to mend?"
Shadows cross my view at night
Moving images cross my eyes
Am I even seeing things right?
I lean back and look to the sky
"Why don't I just give up this time?"

I'm giving up
I'm giving out
All this pain I'm feeling is dragging me down
It's about time
I just don't try
No one's gonna listen to my cries
I'm giving out