Had to let go of the darkness
And walk through it to get to the lightness
Forever was a bother by the presence
Of all the hurt and fragrance
Been walked through for years
Turn to the side with many tears
Pushed away to the curve
Knowing that darkness is what wasn't to be deserved
Walking, hearing the sounds of beauty
As the old was left behind with stupidity
Looking back at the cruelty
Aiming at the light of nudity
Nakedness to the new
As I let go of the darkness of YOU
Something to wonder
As lifted up and leaving the shadows under
Higher, higher the crown
Not looking back at the reason for the frown
Closed door that begins to open
Wonders of all the unbroken promises chosen
Opening to the new chances
To the closings all the dark enhances
when writing poems you don't necessarily have to rhyme the endings of lines. otherwise if you force a rhyme it feels a bit strange to read aloud-- or it just doesn't flow right.
it can also make it harder for you to express what you want-- making it harder for your readers to understand what your story or emotion is
other than that, i feel this was done nicely-- good job :D
Finrod
19 Feb 2020 14:33
In reply to Gemini Guardian
It’s flows fine, the real point of rhyming is for emphasizing words, if you’re whole poem is a rhyme then...nothing is emphasized and it’s really just flat words.
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