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Avatar ThorXXX
12 Apr 2012 20:27
your engaged/ good for you / i hope it turns out well.
Avatar Colyosis
12 Apr 2012 20:11
Like a time filler in between the words?

And thanks so much for the help
Avatar Colyosis
12 Apr 2012 02:28
I fixed them :o now working on more of the story, some of them look like they where entered when they where not cause the line was long so I left it
Avatar Colyosis
12 Apr 2012 01:56
Like this?(not from story just making it up):

They walked up for hours and one said "This is hard"
"Yeah!"


not like:

They walked up for hours and one said "This is hard" "Yeah!"

or

They walked up for hours and one said "This is hard"

"Yeah!"
Avatar Colyosis
11 Apr 2012 00:36
Can you read my story "The Outcasts" please and tell me how it is?? I'm kinda sucl alot at writing stories.
Avatar Darmani Link
10 Apr 2012 05:31
lol damn enter key. got jammed. ment it to only be 3 lines...sowwy
Avatar Darmani Link
10 Apr 2012 05:29
Glad you diddnt. Was looking forward to reading your book :3



































and your a good person lol
Avatar Hylianzombie234
08 Apr 2012 22:02
Thank you for the advice. I'll try to start the next blog off better.
Avatar azn4life
06 Apr 2012 15:50
YAYZ CHUR BACK
Avatar khamila
06 Apr 2012 14:48
Your ALIVE thats nice
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