August 20, 2009
It was a nice, clear sunny day. My family and I had just realized that we had no buns for the ham burgers we were making. Wanting to save gas my older brother and I had decsided to ride our bikes down to Sack n' Save to buy some.
Taking off down our street to the road. Peddling on my newish purple and silver bike. We stop at the road crossing. I'm the type of person who always does that. That no one would expect to get in a accident..we were all wrong.Following my brother through the feild and under the over pass till we got to the store. I was a mess with my hat and black t-shirt on. So I gave my brother the money to go in, while I watch our bikes out side the store.
Soon he comes out with the buns and we take off again. Making our way to that one road before our street. Like I said I'm the type of person that always checks. I'm always extra careful. But..not this time. My world goes black.
I remember nothing. I open my eyes. I can't see right. Where am I? What's going on? What day is it? There's this pain in the back of my head. Like when you lay your on some thing hard. What is this feeling. I close my eyes. Darkness surrounds me again.
When I open them,there's people around me. Their telling me to stay awake. Why am I not talking back. They tell me to sing. I remember faintly hearing the song “Amazing Grace”. Is that me singing. Theres people in army suits. My eyes close.
Open,again people all around. Are we moving? Is this a hall way. Why is there a mirrior on ceiling. I don't feel scared..I don't feel anything, but the pain in my head. It goes dark.
Finally I open my eyes. There's people all around me. There asking me does this hurt. Their pushing on my body. I..feel naked, I am. Theres a blacket over me. What's going on? They feel down my legs to my foot. Pushing. I feel a sharp pain.
Whimpering quietly I say “Please..stop.”
Then I hear it, that voice my mom.

I'll make part 2,What do you think?Thanks for reading.Sorry.