Really like it

this is written really well!

at the end,when it says,"Hush little baby your time is here,
Those nice men in suits you don't need to fear.
ignore Mom's cries,and the pain and realization in here face.
they're bringing you to a better place." is it talking about being takin away by CPS? just curius,cuz my family is about to run a foster home.

^___^ Thanks y'all.

Thanks. ^_____^

,_,

So True Jay people these days.

I think it's okay because you only mentioned it.

I didn't know if it was appropriate since it mentions drugs and abuse. :/

Thanks. :3

Omaigawd ;-;
This is so good...
It made me feel so sad :c