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Love

RP Avatar By LaBorracha
POSTED: 14 Feb 2010 14:37
CATEGORY: Miscellaneous
FEATURED: Yes (Arch_Enemy)
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Love is patient; love is kind
Love develops overtime
Love is trusting, love is true
And it comes from both of you

But sometimes, love is not fair
Especially when temptations near
Sometimes your soul, it will shake
And cause your heart to crack and break

Some try to be whom or what they are not
They curse; they dress different, and they try to be "hot"
They believe love will come, but love isn't blind
It can see through a mask and tell what they've left behind

Love is not selfish
It does not seek one thing
It doesn't think of what it can gain
Just of what it can bring

Love does not judge
If it did, how could it be true
There is one requirement for true love
And that's just to be you

Love has many ways to be described
Wonderful, majestic, and has been inscribed
On the souls of many that have done their part
But here is the most important fact about love
It comes from the heart!
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Comments

Avatar Raisons du Coeur
23 Mar 2014 11:49
Kittens.
Avatar Laurarox
11 Sep 2011 00:08
Quoth jossymzbabyboo:
Omg i luv it message it to me
Avatar Jossymzbabyboo
20 Aug 2011 03:34
Omg i luv it message it to me
Avatar PRAY3R
09 Jul 2011 03:37
Wow. This is the greatest love poem ive EVER heard. Fantastic job Neemuh.
Avatar DripDrop
31 Mar 2011 01:12
Hmm. I've heard a song that goes love is patient love is kind. But nice poem.
Avatar XxSarixX
24 Jan 2011 22:36
Nemo, thats a beautiful poem!
Avatar nanabotman
06 Dec 2010 01:05
nemsaii! beautiful poem ^D^
Avatar hellokittayxo
28 Nov 2010 17:10
this is so true...i love this
Avatar matthinator
20 Aug 2010 05:30
wow its great!
Avatar Astra Moon
03 Jul 2010 10:48
it's beautiful-u have some talent.
Avatar AmAc_OgAiN
18 Apr 2010 00:29
-claps-
Avatar AmAc_OgAiN
18 Apr 2010 00:29
-claps-
Avatar crm.jha
04 Apr 2010 23:19
well done
Avatar Itachi Uchiha
21 Mar 2010 23:07
EPIC
Avatar Little Link
25 Feb 2010 21:31
Nema - This... Is... Spar-- I mean amazing!
Avatar Lineidy
16 Feb 2010 13:51
Love hurts infinity... =S
Avatar RaptorofDoom
16 Feb 2010 11:56
Wow, its quite touching actually.
Avatar LaBorracha
15 Feb 2010 07:40
Thanks everyone! :]

Jibbeh it's not, cuz when I finished writing it, I got my friend to check it, she is really smart, so she would know. But thanks!:]]
Avatar HellMaster
14 Feb 2010 22:11
I Love It
Avatar tinman98
14 Feb 2010 21:35
great heart touching
Avatar JIBby2011
14 Feb 2010 21:09
this is a play-off of an already published poem. i like the contrasts placed within the contrasts. i do not know if you did those unknowingly or not but this is one superb poem:]!!
Avatar TitanDYLAN
14 Feb 2010 21:08
Wow that is a great poem!
Avatar J-Dog97
14 Feb 2010 21:02
awesome
Avatar JABINATOR
14 Feb 2010 20:54
Great blog nema
Avatar LaBorracha
14 Feb 2010 19:36
Thank you all!!!!!![:
Avatar princess Z
14 Feb 2010 19:28
lovely mother!! *claps* now if only the entire world knew this...
Avatar PosessedCarson
14 Feb 2010 19:11
WELL DONE!
Avatar Spike116
14 Feb 2010 18:47
...*sigh*
Avatar Leonidas
14 Feb 2010 17:55
And these three things are left: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love.
Avatar Ellis9549
14 Feb 2010 17:32
Do the comments go up now? o.o
Very good poem
Avatar i.go.grrr
14 Feb 2010 17:08
yay! i luvv it!..lol. its really good!
Avatar HullBreach
14 Feb 2010 17:03
*applauds*
Avatar PosessedCarson
14 Feb 2010 16:44
Of all people, you are the perfect one for this poem Nema. xD
Avatar LaBorracha
14 Feb 2010 16:35
Arvale I didn't it is my own!
Avatar Arvale
14 Feb 2010 16:29
Pretty good, if you didn't copy it from somewhere...
Avatar LaBorracha
14 Feb 2010 16:18
Thanks Vermillion

I know right Vivi -blushes- XD
Avatar AngelGothGirl
14 Feb 2010 15:51
very true nema very true and somebody can only write like this when theyre in love hmmm somebody loves some1 ^_^
Avatar Vermillion
14 Feb 2010 15:14
Its great Nema...
Avatar LaBorracha
14 Feb 2010 14:48
Thanks Arch
Avatar Arch_Enemy
14 Feb 2010 14:45
Approved
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